Intro sounds weird...
..Like...hasnt got enough in it, and it takes to long to get into the song. The song is pretty alright ,better than what other people have done on NG. Sometimes the strings clash with each other, wrong notes/chords I'm guessing.
It needs to get more intense faster.
The funk part (2:15) sounds good, but the synths behind the main part should be removed from that part, and the drumline sooo needs to be changed around in the song a bit more, to repetitive.
But it still sounds ike a good song, could have mroe work done with it